Is this short poem any good?

Escape

When you close your eyes
You can see the stars...
Exactly as they are...
As if your eyes were open

-ES 2013
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It's true.  And if you look long enough, you can see deep into space (while your eyes are shut).  I sometimes wonder if we are trapped souls, temporarily contained by our physical being.  When our personal vibration breaks our physical bond (die), we are free to travel out there...

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